Sunday, October 19, 2014
A Message In The Breath Of Allah, by Ali F. Sareini
My problem with thematic anthologies is that I usually like the theme better than most of the stories. Take, for instance, this book which has a brilliant plan: invite current or former guests of the American correctional system to write fiction about it. Great idea. And some of the stories are fine.
But so far, most of the ones I have read aren't crime stories.
Yes, I know. Prison implies crime. But if your subject is surviving in a hostile environment, the fact that a felony got you into the place doesn't by itself make it a crime story.
And then there is the whole noir thing. Merely being violent and gloomy does not qualify a piece of fiction as noir. As I have said here, too often, a noir story ideally has three elements: 1) a nobody, who 2) tries to be somebody, and 3) gets stomped on by fate. Why are those the elements of noir? For the same reason a sonnet has fourteen lines.
Having whined sufficiently for one day, let me address this masterful story by Ali F. Sareini, who recently finished a term for second degree homicide.
Ali (the character, not the author, I hope), has been praying to Allah for decades to be released from prison. A weaker spirit might feel a twinge of doubt after all that time, but Ali concludes that his prayers are simply the wrong media to get his message across.
He decides he needs to send a messenger directly to Allah. Fortunately, he is working as a helper in the part of the prison full of elderly and ill inmates. "I reverently called the unit 'the messengers' home.'" So all he has to do is explain clearly the plea he wants delivered and then, immediately, send the astonished courier off to the afterlife.
That's the creepiest motive for murder I have run across in a long time.
(By the way, should I have included a spoiler alert? No, because this isn't the plot of the story: it's the premise.)
So, does this story have crime? Check. Does it have a nobody trying to be somebody? I would say trying to negotiate directly with Allah counts. As for whether the ending counts as noir, telling that would need a spoiler alert.
By the way, this is a story with its theme showing. (The theme is what the story is about, other than the plot and character. Some people like it visible and some don't.) The theme, repeated in several contexts is this: Why do we take care of each other?
Much to ponder in this great story.